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Old 07-13-2007, 01:18 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Re: 40 days and 40 nights.

What do you think of the opening two sentences? Would you keep reading,seriously?

"Salvation, not in the religious sense, but more of a personal awakening; it was a sudden spurt of life in a stagnant pond of a soul. I saw it one early May afternoon; it was full of July sky blue, the yellow of early wheat coated in sweet honey, and she held a new to the world child in her arms. "
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