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Old 07-13-2007, 10:31 AM   #20 (permalink)
KB.
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Re: 40 days and 40 nights.

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Originally Posted by almostfamous View Post
If anything I would slim down the last sentence. 'new to the world baby' felt a little crowded.

how about I call you a g-bird and tell you to kiss my ass?


Just kidding, G-bird.




That was the one I was going to cut out, that and one other part. I got one more story to write on the myspace page before I get into full swing on this thing, and then I got to call that old Muse in St. Louis and tell her what I am doing, ask her permission to use some poetic license, and tell her thanks again before I get too involved in it all.

I spent some of the morning fixing up Ashley's myspace page, go check it out see what you think.
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