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[Raven]

Okay, heres the thing. Since noone wanted to play and write with me, I shall do the story in chapter installments. I am working chapter 1 now, and I will post it by Sunday evening. Since I am involving all of you who wish to be in it, you can have your say and comments here. I feel it would interupt the flow of the story to comment in between installments. So all praise, lambasting and suggestions go HERE! (please remember I am NOT a professional writer, and am just having fun) so be easy on me! xx

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[kazalala]

I am reading and enjoying it Raven

[farmer giles]

jimbo the feedom fighting farmer

is ready to do battle

[Snowfire]

Dont you dare marry me off to Oscar. I deserve better than a mere slave girl

[Raven]

you get what you get!

[AussiePam]

First time I've seen this, Raven. I'll go and read up what you've written. It's Sunday here in the land Down Under, and a bit overcast but hot. Think I'm getting the ferry with him indoors and heading for Manly beach. I have this crazy tradition that, on Sunday, it's good to walk by water. Dunno where it comes from, but it works for me.

Six days shall you do all kinds of madly active stuff, climb mountains literally and figuratively - but on the seventh day, it's good to walk by water, sit by water, swim in water, just be.

[Raven]

Originally Posted by AussiePam

First time I've seen this, Raven. I'll go and read up what you've written. It's Sunday here in the land Down Under, and a bit overcast but hot. Think I'm getting the ferry with him indoors and heading for Manly beach. I have this crazy tradition that, on Sunday, it's good to walk by water. Dunno where it comes from, but it works for me.

Six days shall you do all kinds of madly active stuff, climb mountains literally and figuratively - but on the seventh day, it's good to walk by water, sit by water, swim in water, just be.

Well first chapter is up! Maybe I'll start on the second tomorrow.
Hubby is manfluing on the sofa. Poor fella.

[Raven]

Originally Posted by farmer giles

jimbo the feedom fighting farmer

is ready to do battle

Hope you enjoy! You are chief torturer and executioner.

[Bryn Mawr]

A brill start - can't wai for the next instalment

[G-man]

Originally Posted by Raven

Okay, heres the thing. Since noone wanted to play and write with me, I shall do the story in chapter installments. I am working chapter 1 now, and I will post it by Sunday evening. Since I am involving all of you who wish to be in it, you can have your say and comments here. I feel it would interupt the flow of the story to comment in between installments. So all praise, lambasting and suggestions go HERE! (please remember I am NOT a professional writer, and am just having fun) so be easy on me! xx

It's not that some of us didn't want to play, as some of us were too busy or didn't know about it. I may try and get involved with writing on here more, but at the moment, I'm spending most of my time writing what will hopefully be my first published novel... in fact, my first completed novel.

______ I would love to get involved by starting a community story and already have an idea for that and I'll start that when I have a free minute or two to sit down and type something out. It will be a lot of fun and I'd love for you and the rest of you to get involved in that silliness.



______ Anyway, I'm not a professional writer either, but I've managed to have a thing or two published over the years... I'm still learning how to write fiction, however and I could certainly use the practice. It's really nice to see some folks getting creative on here!

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