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    If I Could [a softer song]

    OK Oscar this is it. its so funny how the story behind the music leans in a different direction..you might not even like this kind of music...lol


    I wanted to say something about Love, Loss, Hope and Fear..
    forgive the video, I`m not the best at that stuff..still working on it.



    If I Could

    Damn the night, damn the fear in this heart,
    and every word that tore Us apart.
    If I could back-up to Our last good-by,
    and take back every alibi...

    chorus:

    If I Could,
    could You love.

    Damn the night,damn this wanting in Me,
    the little things I just couldn`t see.
    If We could give it one more try,
    take away all the hurting inside..

    chorus:

    If I Could,
    could You love.

    Bridge:

    All of the memories
    are a part of Me..
    and the life I`ve lived, theres this tragedy.
    If I could change it all,bring Us back somehow,
    I`d sit down to write a brand new history.


    Damn the night,damn this wanting in Me,
    the little things I just couldn`t see.
    If We could give it one more try,
    take away all the hurting inside..

    chorus:

    If I Could,
    could You love...

    If I Could,
    could You love...Me.

    Copyright 2011 Second-hand Hearts Vincent

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    Re: If I Could [a softer song]

    That actually brought a lump to my throat.

    That's the art of writing music, to touch ' something' In the listener.

    Very proffessional !!! I think you have an awesome talent there.

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    Re: If I Could [a softer song]

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    Quote Originally Posted by oscar View Post
    That actually brought a lump to my throat.

    That's the art of writing music, to touch ' something' In the listener.

    Very proffessional !!! I think you have an awesome talent there.
    thank you Oscar..you know someone else struggles and sometimes yours doesn`t seem so bad. kinda like "i cried when I had no shoes..till I saw a man with no feet. I have always found other stories far more emotional. the story behind this..
    I write on different sites and I read this young girl`s work. sad stuff. got to talking with her and sharing notes. I mean she was young,15-16. In the notes she kept telling me about her father leaving and how she wished she had him back, and how could He leave her. If I could" keeps coming up in the conversations..if I could have been prettier, if I could have talked to him, and so much more. it all revolved around love, she even asked me if I could do all that do you think he would come back for me? she about had me in tears..
    I finished the song hung it out there and the comments were about a love story between two..so I made the video to fit that.
    I really thought this would effect women far more than men, out of about 1000 hits, I swear there wasn`t 10 women comment. all men. thats the story its a conversation with a little girl....lol

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