I agree with what Along said, "You are a diamond in the rough." I love the fact that you've written a poem and want to share it with your friends.
Poetry and creative writing is in the eye of the beholder. Your thoughts can be honest, sincere, silly, whimsical...any feelings that you want....all is good.
I loved your heartfelt poem.......keep writing and don't stop:-6
Jimbo your a beautiful soul and your poem is awesome. :-4
ALOHA!!
MOTTO TO LIVE BY:
"Life should NOT be a journey to the grave with the intention of arriving safely in an attractive and well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, chocolate in one hand, champagne in the other, body thoroughly used up, totally worn out and screaming.