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Heyy, right i've never really done this before, showed what i wrote and stuff. But i would like to see what you all think. Soo here goes.

I remember how i used to sit and watch you play.

I thought we were close, but we were far away.

I remeber how the rain used to fall onto your little blonde curls.

I alway's loved you, but you were never like other girls.

I remeber how you used to look at me with love in your eyes.

I can still see you lying their so innocent and sweet.

I alway's thought it was you, now thats its to late, i can see it wasnt true.

I wish i would have left you lying there, But the way i was feeling left me reeling.

I wish i hadn't done those things to you.

I felt so low and didn't know where to go.

I was meant to be happy, but instead i hated you.

I just didn't know what to do, so i did those things to you.

I remeber when i first held you.

I felt so happy, but also sad.

I wanted to love you, but i felt so bad.

Now that you're gone, i feel that i dont belong, for i was the one who was so wrong.

Beautiful...

That's really nice work there Ilona, keep up the good work!!

Thanks for the comments Keep them coming