My Story
Posted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 1:03 pm
*reading it
Page 1 of 1
My Story
Posted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 2:41 pm
not yet, not until i read more ... it's a good start though.
My Story
Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 9:50 am
i finished reading it. 
is it going to be in chapters? if that's the first chapter i might suggest that you take the last paragraph and use it for the start of chapter 2 and maybe have the leaflet coming into play after the time has passed. you have a very good framework there.
is it going to be in chapters? if that's the first chapter i might suggest that you take the last paragraph and use it for the start of chapter 2 and maybe have the leaflet coming into play after the time has passed. you have a very good framework there.My Story
Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 10:22 am
hahaha... no, you have a very cool tone to your writing and chose a good theme for your ability. it needs to be shined up, of course, but i think it will be well worth your effort.
My Story
Posted: Tue Sep 26, 2006 8:12 am
:-6
randall's writing career,
Hundreds of thousands of words written.
A few short stories completed.
Most books never got past the first chapter
Did win a short story competition in the English evening paper in Hong Kong - Prize - a nice wrist watch.
Forty years ago at least I thought of the start of a poem but never could past the following
"I had Dreams,
And had the means,
To make my dreams come true.
BUT............."
Shortly after that I decided to write my life story but didn't get far past the title
"Portrait Of A Failure."
Result,.
Still tapping away.
God bless all.
randall.
:)
randall's writing career,
Hundreds of thousands of words written.
A few short stories completed.
Most books never got past the first chapter
Did win a short story competition in the English evening paper in Hong Kong - Prize - a nice wrist watch.
Forty years ago at least I thought of the start of a poem but never could past the following
"I had Dreams,
And had the means,
To make my dreams come true.
BUT............."
Shortly after that I decided to write my life story but didn't get far past the title
"Portrait Of A Failure."
Result,.
Still tapping away.
God bless all.
randall.
:)
My Story
Posted: Sat Sep 30, 2006 5:05 pm
...
*awaits update*
*awaits update*
My Story
Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 9:46 am
Can't wait for the rest!
I love reading and get through at least two books a week, please let me know when you've done some more work on it and i'll do my review for you
I love reading and get through at least two books a week, please let me know when you've done some more work on it and i'll do my review for you