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Sunshine Man
Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 4:16 pm
by woppy71
Pinky wrote: You make me happy
Brighten my day
Hard to find words
not easy to say
Your face of sunshine
eyes of fire
with you lies
my raging desire
words of chocolate
voice of honey
golden smiles
worth more than money
You're a beautiful gem
I hope you know
you're more lovely to me
than the fresh fallen snow.
Lovely.....
Sunshine Man
Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 7:02 pm
by K.Snyder
Very enchanting
Sunshine Man
Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 3:33 am
by lanaia74
VERY well done!
Sunshine Man
Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 3:45 am
by Uncle Kram
Another good one Pinks. I use to write poems like this and when I was in a band, I wrote all the lyrics. It wasn't until a few years later that I learned to play the guitar and started adding a few chords and turning them into songs. Most songs only have a few chords so it's easier than you'd think. I can see this poem as a song. Get strumming. :-6
Sunshine Man
Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 4:30 am
by Uncle Kram
Pinky;468519 wrote: I'm rubbish at playing instruments (except air oboe):yh_giggle
Yeah I've heard you're quite a virtuoso :wah:
Sunshine Man
Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 4:39 am
by Uncle Kram
Pinky;468522 wrote: 99% of rumours have some truth to them:yh_whistl
Not if I've started them :sneaky:
Sunshine Man
Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 8:09 pm
by guppy
a beautiful poem. :-4
Sunshine Man
Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 8:14 pm
by CARLA
Very nice Pinky you did it again.. :-4