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Cascade of color encircling the sky,

chromatic harmony overhead

that rejoins in the finale

of the storm’s closing measure,

verses of violet,

a refrain of red,

ballades of blue,

shine, as the

encore

ends.



(this was my poem I wrote tonight, it is a Reversed Etheree: 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1)

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chonsigirl wrote: Cascade of color encircling the sky,

chromatic harmony overhead

that rejoins in the finale

of the storm’s closing measure,

verses of violet,

a refrain of red,

ballades of blue,

shine, as the

encore

ends.



(this was my poem I wrote tonight, it is a Reversed Etheree: 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1)


Beautiful, Chons....I particularly love "verses of violet"

I hadn't heard of Reversed Etheree.

chonsigirl wrote: Cascade of color encircling the sky,

chromatic harmony overhead

that rejoins in the finale

of the storm’s closing measure,

verses of violet,

a refrain of red,

ballades of blue,

shine, as the

encore

ends.



(this was my poem I wrote tonight, it is a Reversed Etheree: 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1)


Just amazing beautiful girl

I would love to be able to put myself into words like that:-6

weber wrote: Just amazing beautiful girl

I would love to be able to put myself into words like that:-6


Maybe you ought to try, Weber, because the way you just wrote..."put myself into words" is beautifully expressed :-6

Chonsi

That was simply beautiful :-6