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Mirage of the mind

Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2006 8:37 pm
by K.Snyder
Oh...

You are...

you are magnificent!

Mirage of the mind

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 2:53 am
by lanaia74
Superb! Bravo! Applauds!

Mirage of the mind

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 6:09 am
by Uncle Kram
Very good Pinky. As always :-6

Mirage of the mind

Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 10:05 pm
by Okie
Pinky;437067 wrote: A light in my mind

Fire in my soul

Beyond quenching

beyond control

It rages within

contained without

burning me up

from inside out.

Offer me your water

Quench my thirst

abate the hunger

that's ripe to burst.

Show me what passion

is hidden inside;

warmer than sun

pulling like tide.

You're an oasis

a mirage in my mind

Who's to guess

what I might find?


I like it. Good going.

Mirage of the mind

Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 10:21 pm
by guppy
that is really really good pinky:-6

Mirage of the mind

Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 10:41 pm
by CARLA
Excellent Pinky very very good..:cool: