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Pooh Bear

spies honey tree

and rumbles his tummy.

“Who could resist golden wonder?

as he scrambles up the tree and gets stuck!

The philosopher teddy sighs

as he waits for rescue

by dear friends of

Pooh Bear.

Piglet

trapped by a storm

writes a message for help,

placed in a glass bottle it floats,

as a nearby chair becomes a life boat

Pooh Bear sails by in honey pot,

waterfall tips them both

as Pooh catches

Piglet.

Tigger

bounces to door,

knocking for his breakfast

and finding “yuchy honey, tells

stories of the Heffalumps and Woozles,

snitchers of honey and bad dreams

for innocent teddies,

but not for brave

Tigger.

That is very cool, Chonsi. I've always loved poetry and appreciated its rhythm even though I have never fully understood all the parameters.

It's visually beautiful too :-6