Unexpected
Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 10:12 pm
pinky you have outdone yourself on this one....its very moving.....
That was very good...
But you probably don't need me to tell you that...
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Unexpected
Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 6:15 am
Unexpected
Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2007 1:13 pm
really great work..
love your use of words and the melodic flow...and it's cohesive and effectively moving as well. excellent
love your use of words and the melodic flow...and it's cohesive and effectively moving as well. excellent
Unexpected
Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 1:11 am
Pinky;592065 wrote: I'd all but forgotten that smile -
that sunny veneer
You were shut from my mind
yet you chose to reappear.
You were unexpected
both then and now
at my most unprotected
I resolve to remain unaffected.
It struck me like bolt of lightening
setting the world alight again
It's almost frightening
that I so readily regress to when
I first saw your face
that beautiful face -
so different now,
so out of place.
You're so alien to me now
yet we're still the same
two wild, unfettered spirits
that the world can never tame
Too challenging to each other
yet too sane to give in
it's equal pain and pleasure
to know what might have been.
Love the words and can read the thruth behind them......well done x
that sunny veneer
You were shut from my mind
yet you chose to reappear.
You were unexpected
both then and now
at my most unprotected
I resolve to remain unaffected.
It struck me like bolt of lightening
setting the world alight again
It's almost frightening
that I so readily regress to when
I first saw your face
that beautiful face -
so different now,
so out of place.
You're so alien to me now
yet we're still the same
two wild, unfettered spirits
that the world can never tame
Too challenging to each other
yet too sane to give in
it's equal pain and pleasure
to know what might have been.
Love the words and can read the thruth behind them......well done x
Unexpected
Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 4:56 am
The best so far kiddo.