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The Truth

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 8:47 pm
by watermark
Pinky;708269 wrote: The dark revolving

Nouns absorbing into verbs

Memories exploding

Intensity imploding

The beauty, intensity of

Night, vacancy, a beautiful sight

A hug of nothingness

Yet forever in heart

Never apart

In soul, mind or dreams

Reality, however it seems

Cannot condemn

With speech or pen

A true and honourable heart.


Your poem has a freshness to it that made me want to read it again. Especially enjoyed the last five lines. Thanks for posting.