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A free fall of thoughts

That warrant attention

An image of love

Rising past all dissention

Forever in your eyes

Is my sanctuary

The kindness I seek

In the man I will marry.

A bond of compassion

Of love for the life

In the woman you vowed

To take for your wife.

Where the sky seemed once pale

Now it’s vibrant and clear

And things that lost value

We now hold as dear.

The world that seemed cold

Now warms with your touch

And I never imagined

I could love you so much.

koan wrote: A free fall of thoughts

That warrant attention

An image of love

Rising past all dissension

Forever in your eyes

Is my sanctuary

The kindness I seek

In the man I will marry.

A bond of compassion

Of love for the life

In the woman you vowed

To take for your wife.

Where the sky seemed once pale

Now it’s vibrant and clear

And things that lost value

We now hold as dear.

The world that seemed cold

Now warms with your touch

And I never imagined

I could love you so much.


Wow! Utterly blown away. Beautiful beyond beautiful!

Nice to see this on FG in the morning...Koan, you have an exceptional creative mind. You alway did from the start. Beautiful meaningful poem. :yh_flower