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Waiting for Love
Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 11:27 am
by Mister Smith
I wrote this short poem ages ago, thought I'd share it with everyone:)
Waiting for Love
An aching heart, yet to be tamed,
An unknown love, yet to be named,
A burning desire, yet to be lit,
Those peaks of delight, yet to be hit
A heartfelt promise, yet to be said,
Those three words, still in my head,
The sweetest emotion, yet to be felt
The card of love, yet to be dealt.
Waiting for Love
Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 4:14 pm
by Omni_Skittles
That was sweet :-6
Waiting for Love
Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 4:23 pm
by Carolly
Mister Smith;883083 wrote: I wrote this short poem ages ago, thought I'd share it with everyone:)
Waiting for Love
An aching heart, yet to be tamed,
An unknown love, yet to be named,
A burning desire, yet to be lit,
Those peaks of delight, yet to be hit
A heartfelt promise, yet to be said,
Those three words, still in my head,
The sweetest emotion, yet to be felt
The card of love, yet to be dealt.Thats sooooo nice Smithy....I write poetry also and have had a couple published....anyway so well written;)
Waiting for Love
Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 4:35 pm
by CARLA
Very nice and very true well done.
Waiting for Love
Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 5:11 pm
by Kathy Ellen
Lovely poem Mr. Smith:-6
Thank you:-6
Waiting for Love
Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 5:22 am
by along-for-the-ride
At the time of that writing, you must have been looking for love "in all the wrong places." I hope you have since found it.
Waiting for Love
Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 10:55 am
by Mister Smith
Hey peeps!
Thanks for the comments:)
I'll prob post another poem later