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She Cries

Posted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 10:34 am
by jones jones
i wrote this for my youngest sister mel ...

she was physically and mentally abused by her husband for many years ...

one day i helped him die ...

best thing i ever did ...



She cowers in a corner

as he looms over her

a bottle of amber

in his left hand

his right poised to strike.

"Please" she begs

"not in front of the kids."

"f -- ck you" he spits

and breaks her nose

with a single blow.

"Bastard" she cries

but only under her breath.

"bitch… whore" as he tries

to dredge up every filthy

word he can summon.

The children… wide eyed

and afraid cling to her as

he kicks her in her face

shattering her cheekbone

then at last he turns away.

She's bitten through her lip

and cannot talk ... so the boy

ten years old fetches her

mobile so he can ask for

help from someone … anyone

But no one comes cos who

wants to get involved in

domestic violence?

it's a private thing isn't it?

so she cries.

She Cries

Posted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 12:15 pm
by RedGlitter
:| I lack words.

She Cries

Posted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 1:10 pm
by pinkchick
jones jones;930153 wrote: i wrote this for my youngest sister mel ...

she was physically and mentally abused by her husband for many years ...

one day i helped him die ...

best thing i ever did ...



She cowers in a corner

as he looms over her

a bottle of amber

in his left hand

his right poised to strike.

"Please" she begs

"not in front of the kids."

"f -- ck you" he spits

and breaks her nose

with a single blow.

"Bastard" she cries

but only under her breath.

"bitch¦ whore" as he tries

to dredge up every filthy

word he can summon.

The children¦ wide eyed

and afraid cling to her as

he kicks her in her face

shattering her cheekbone

then at last he turns away.

She's bitten through her lip

and cannot talk ... so the boy

ten years old fetches her

mobile so he can ask for

help from someone ¦ anyone

But no one comes cos who

wants to get involved in

domestic violence?

it's a private thing isn't it?

so she cries.


I want to respond but my words seem empty :-1

She Cries

Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 2:45 am
by Hope6
:-1:-1:-1