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Like a year

Stretches every minute

That passes without you

The breezes may blow alright

How non-soothing their feel

When you, my eyes see not

Non-stop the birds may chirp

Like a dirge it all does sound

When far from you dwell I this day

Colorful as the rainbow hues

The blossoming flora may be

Yet, how unsightly they are to me

Without you to make them real

How slow time doth crawls

How empty the world does seem

When Miles separate you

From me!

Without me for the next 36 hours. I'll be back. Nice Poem. I am learning the ropes of poetry Carp, between you & Koan.

Paula wrote: Without me for the next 36 hours. I'll be back. Nice Poem. I am learning the ropes of poetry Carp, between you & Koan.
That's good to know Paula. Have a great time while away for 36 hours. Can't wait till you return. Cheers!

A very painful feeling expressed eloquently.

Koan, please identify the pain, point to the spot? :wah:

Paula wrote: Koan, please identify the pain, point to the spot? :wah:
Found it. It was behind the couch.

koan wrote: Found it. It was behind the couch.
Koan is right, it's really there. Hope you can see it now dear Paula.