ForumGarden

Silence grows

Silver streams

Golden groves

Silky dreams.

Darkness knows

A moonlit sigh

Impassioned throes

A starlit eye.

A crystal glows

Revealing where

The path I chose

Is crystal clear.

In the silence

I shall dwell

Think not of heaven

Nor of hell.

And in that centre

Point shall be

A home where you

Can visit me.

koan wrote: Silence grows

Silver streams

Golden groves

Silky dreams.



Darkness knows

A moonlit sigh

Impassioned throes

A starlit eye.



A crystal glows

Revealing where

The path I chose

Is crystal clear.



In the silence

I shall dwell

Think not of heaven

Nor of hell.



And in that centre

Point shall be

A home where you

Can visit me. Hugs & Kisses Koan

Sweeet. Nice work, koan. Good measure, metaphor, and imagery.

I know this is not going to sound very technical...but wow....pretty...and made me ache a bit.

i thought that was very good work.and quite creative too.