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Above The Rain.
Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 4:30 am
by jones jones
Limitless ... One of my rare short pieces.
I want to fly above the rain
Soar up into the night;
I yearn to follow your angelic light
And so never return again
I want to dance to your refrain
Spend my life with you;
I yearn to change my aura’s hue
And so never return again.
Above The Rain.
Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 2:42 pm
by Oscar Namechange
I like that JJ and I think I can see the meaning.
Above The Rain.
Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 7:10 pm
by limitless
It's beautiful!
I love short pieces that are relatable,
It says so much in so little,
I like the fact it isn't linked to a gender and your voice and your want is dominant
Very appreciative! Thank you (:
Above The Rain.
Posted: Mon Nov 14, 2011 9:31 am
by jones jones
oscar;1375576 wrote: I like that JJ and I think I can see the meaning.
Good on you Oscar! I love to fly and I try to do so every night!!
Above The Rain.
Posted: Mon Nov 14, 2011 9:32 am
by jones jones
Limitless ... Give me a more earthling like name to call you. Thank you so much.
Above The Rain.
Posted: Mon Nov 14, 2011 2:30 pm
by Oscar Namechange
jones jones;1375652 wrote: Good on you Oscar! I love to fly and I try to do so every night!!
I admire anyone who can write meaningful words and especially when they are few words but sum up so much.
I have no talent whatsoever when It comes to writing.
Above The Rain.
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 5:30 am
by limitless
how about lily
and - no worries I enjoyed reading it!
Above The Rain.
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 9:43 am
by jones jones
limitless;1376384 wrote: how about lily
and - no worries I enjoyed reading it!
Cool! Lily works for me cos I have a very special friend and she's called Lili!