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<t>I can understand that, being a song writer I always like opinions, and sometimes I take them...lol<br/>
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and people always point out mistakes, thats always helpful. well I guess I better have it the way I want it before I post. thanks for the info. Lane<br/>
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wanted to remove old song posts, and sometimes I re-write lyric, wanted to be able to "edit them once posted.

how do we edit OLD posts here? can`t find ..

thank you ahead of time. Lane

<r>Oscar I stuck this in here..I don`t know if you remember these guys. this is one of my fav" by them. you might be able to find a better version.<br/>
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Chain Lighting..38 Special<br/>
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<t>again..nothing reflects my life in this work, just thoughts<br/>
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do you think of me<br/>
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in your Winter rains,<br/>
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grays touch the ocean.<br/>
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<t>oscar;1395894 wrote: That actually brought a lump to my throat.<br/>
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That's the art of writing music, to touch ' something' In the listener.<br/>
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Very proffessional !!! I think you have an awesome talent there.<br/>
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thank you Oscar..you know someone else struggles and ...

<r>OK Oscar this is it. its so funny how the story behind the music leans in a different direction..you might not even like this kind of music...lol <br/>
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<t>oscar;1395848 wrote: The lyric writers that Impress me the most are the one's who, as you did there, without suffering the experience themselves, tune In to what others feel and write from the heart.<br/>
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thank you Oscar your to kind. once in awhile you bump into something that really effects you, I think the conversation really wrote this song. I don`t have many songs.. lyric is a tough road.. I mostly write free-verse.

<r>none of the lyric I write reflects my life..this was a emotional conversation with a guy and I had to write about it. hope its ok to put a link" in here, it gives you a better idea how the words work. any thoughts are welcome.<br/>
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one person i talked with, He lost his wife, and his little ...

<t>along-for-the-ride;1395835 wrote: From Elton John's "Your Song":<br/>
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<t>I remember the song, thats what I`m talking about..I listen to the production in the 80`s and 90`s thats great stuff.<br/>
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there is a danger in loving somebody to much

and its hard when you know its your heart you can`t trust

There is a reason why people don`t who they are

Sometimes love just ain`t enough. lol

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80`s and 90`s had such great production..I love the era" hold on I`ll post one more with one hit girl..man" could she sing, the production in the music was terrific

Oscar you have to have this song to make it right!...lol its mid 80`s but one of my favs"

Mr Mister - Kyrie Eleison

"Lord, have mercy"

I think this is written well, a little dark for me, the description is very good.

Macaroni;1395737 wrote: Hi Lane and welcome


hello to you, nice to be here, thanks for the welcome.

SnoozeAgain;1395727 wrote: I'm in Utah, if you don't like the weather, wait a day. It was 94 degrees Monday and 54 degrees on Tuesday.

Welcome to the forum, nice to meet you.


thank you for the welcome, thats nice country..and I believe that.

thank you..sound good to me. I`ll bang around and see what happens. thank you for the info.

thank you for getting in here, I just found that out.

hey Oscar that would make a great re-make for T.V everyone I know was in love with Betty Boop" ..Betty we love you!...

oscar;1395690 wrote: That pretty much describes the folks I met In Austin, Texas but It's a big big dream of mine to tour America.


Oscar, one thing about the States, if you don`t like the climate, about a 12hr drive will change it for you...lol

Betty Boop;1395700 wrote: Hello and welcome to FG Lane :-6


hi Betty..thanks so much for the welcome. had a friend with the handle "bo-bo-b-do"...lol

<r>along-for-the-ride;1395699 wrote: Hello Lane. Enjoy your visits with us. :guitarist You can post videos in the "Your favorite Videos" section. Hubby and I have been to Tennessee, but not to Nashville. Beautiful state.<br/>
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hi Macaroni, hope you made it.

I`ll keep after it, but I`ll try to spread it around different boards..

guess I`m going to have the same trouble with photos and video too. :-5

Oscar that will be a great memory for you. you won`t believe the people there, they are so kind and friendly. not much off the plate..people will listen to your music, throw a buck" in the case, feed you if your hungry.

o` and yes, there are lots of people around this area doing music. we have a small town here we all go, huge dance floor, great stage...people from all over come to play and share their music. all free, and everyone or anyone can get up and play :guitarist

hi Oscar. thank you for the welcome, I have to go to the test area..I can`t see any of the videos here, I guess I need 15 posts to view...lol

hello all I`m Lane,

real simple guy I like to read and write. I`m trying to write lyric now, most of what I do write is free-verse. I play guitar so that helps with the lyric part. hope to meet you all.