another poem , by LW

Lone Wolf · Post by **Lone Wolf** » Sun Jan 04, 2009 11:46 pm

my tence precence waits

with open doors

for that ever dreamed happiness

for many long years i been lying waiting

in the grave of lost souls and shattered hearts

alone my heart withers and turns to black

as the pain grows, and i;m dragged to the

bitter darkness of hell

The only savior is my angel of light

who is unaware of the hapening beneath her feet

I cry for help but the walls of hell are thick

and my voice is swallowed by the crys of the

of unrescued souls

A glimmer of light,

a voice i here,

the calling of of the army of light

a hope of rescue from the dammed

A little dark and sad im sorry...but seem to write my best work in the shadow of life.

please leave a comment , Thanks

along-for-the-ride · Post by **along-for-the-ride** » Mon Jan 05, 2009 3:14 pm

Here is an "Angel of Light" for you, Lone wolf.

Your poem is indeed sad. Is this a momentary sadness or a constant sadness?

Welcome to the Garden. This is the place to express yourself. I do hope you find joy in your life.

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Kathy Ellen · Post by **Kathy Ellen** » Mon Jan 05, 2009 3:49 pm

Oh ,I do like your poem Lonewolf, but it is dark...

How did you get into writing poems? I'm not good at writing poems, but I do love reading them....

Why don't you add some more of your poems. Maybe you could start a thread in our writing forum...That would be nice:-6;)

Hope6 · Post by **Hope6** » Tue Jan 06, 2009 5:37 am

Your poem is very sad, but kinda hopeful too in a way!

but i think its beautiful! :-6

that's a good idea though you should start your on poetry thread in the poetry section! :guitarist

Lone Wolf · Post by **Lone Wolf** » Tue Jan 06, 2009 7:58 am

Hello Friends...Buddies..Brother..Sisiters

sorry for the sadness, im not like that all the time, but the mood does make good poems.

and thats how i got into writing them, its theroputic to put the words down, and there is only 1 thing worse than everyone knowing, No one knowing!!!

a probelm shared is a problem halfed.

well this one is not realy fit for the moment as its still winter, But just a sample as to show i can write happy poems...

:yh_rotfl:yh_rotfl

The sign of spring is in the air

the cherping birds

the rampent hair

the frisky MareBut this time only comes for these delights

but once a year upon are path of life

The flowers blossom

the sun breaks through

as new life brings a hole new viewHearts are alive this time of year

as the winter blues fade

the spring colours glow

and summer sun lights the air once again

till next time my friends...LW

Lone Wolf · Post by **Lone Wolf** » Thu Jan 15, 2009 2:37 am

What no comments this time!!!!!!

didnt you like this one, shall i go back to the dark ones..:-3 :-3 ???

LW X