Fifty Shades of Grey.

Post by **jones jones** » Sat Feb 09, 2013 8:18 am

The woman who wrote this novel is like a gazillionaire. Now right here in the back of beyond in darkest Africa, three chicks in the RSA have had a similar book proposal snapped up by an agent and the publishing rights are being auctioned as we speak!

As a writer I can do erotica standing on my head, but I need a "hook." In writing, a hook is like a sentence or paragraph which gets the reader interested from the get go.

So come on ladies, let me hear what you would like to read about in a similar novel. Gimme a hook. I don't know if the gaffer will allow you to put it up in a thread, but if not you can send me a private message and let me know your preference. Or you can like "hint" in the thread about what you think would make a good hook.

Patsy Warnick · Post by **Patsy Warnick** » Sat Feb 09, 2013 9:08 am

Talk's not cheap and neither is...?

This kernel won't pop.....

What's the substance of your story

give me something to work off of..

Good Morning

Patsy

Snooz · Post by **Snooz** » Sat Feb 09, 2013 10:27 am

What you need to do is write fanfic on a wildly popular yet poorly written book series that has been or will be made into a series of wildly popular yet poorly acted movies. Then hide the evidence that you're infringing on the original's copyright.

The origins of '50 Shades of Grey' go missing - latimes.com

Patsy Warnick · Post by **Patsy Warnick** » Mon Feb 11, 2013 8:30 am

JJ

I understand the 50 shades of grey book

it's your book - what exactly is your story based on? similar to 50 shades?

romance - mystery etc..?

Patsy

YZGI · Post by **YZGI** » Mon Feb 11, 2013 12:11 pm

I'll give you a hook..

Money makes up for ugly.