Mirage of the mind

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K.Snyder
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Oh...

You are...

you are magnificent!
lanaia74
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Superb! Bravo! Applauds!
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Uncle Kram
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Very good Pinky. As always :-6


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Pinky;437067 wrote: A light in my mind

Fire in my soul

Beyond quenching

beyond control

It rages within

contained without

burning me up

from inside out.

Offer me your water

Quench my thirst

abate the hunger

that's ripe to burst.

Show me what passion

is hidden inside;

warmer than sun

pulling like tide.

You're an oasis

a mirage in my mind

Who's to guess

what I might find?


I like it. Good going.
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that is really really good pinky:-6
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CARLA
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Post by CARLA »

Excellent Pinky very very good..:cool:
ALOHA!!

MOTTO TO LIVE BY:

"Life should NOT be a journey to the grave with the intention of arriving safely in an attractive and well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, chocolate in one hand, champagne in the other, body thoroughly used up, totally worn out and screaming.

WOO HOO!!, what a ride!!!"

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