Portrait of a Terrorist

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lanaia74
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Portrait of a Terrorist

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I stalk the prey that is the innocence of life

I want things done my way

I am into my cause so deep I would give up my own life

From my cause I will never stray.

My biggest achievement will be I die as a martyr

To me my cause means that much

Will you stand in my way,sir?

I will express myself killing by the bunch.

Terror is my game

To make my cause known

A militant by name

I am not afraid to die for the seeds I sew.

Death to me no big deal

Assassination doesn't bother me

For my cause I will kill

I will succeed just wait and see.

People say my way is that of a coward

For any cause would you be willing to kill or die?

I will always move forward

Because my cause will survive.
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Rapunzel
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Portrait of a Terrorist

Post by Rapunzel »

Whilst I support your right to post poetry, I strongly object to what you have posted here!

I think your poem is an insult to people who have suffered through terrorism and its even an insult to terrorists(!) who must believe passionately in what they do or they wouldn't give their lives for it!

Death to me no big deal

Assassination doesn't bother me


I am sure it is one hell of a big deal to them actually!

It sure as hell is a big deal to us, even if our family and friends haven't personally been involved!

You are dealing extremely lightly with an extremely serious subject and you're insulting our emotions and intellect by doing it! :mad:
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