Sunshine Man

woppy71 · Post by **woppy71** » Wed Sep 13, 2006 4:16 pm

Pinky wrote: You make me happy

Brighten my day

Hard to find words

not easy to say

Your face of sunshine

eyes of fire

with you lies

my raging desire

words of chocolate

voice of honey

golden smiles

worth more than money

You're a beautiful gem

I hope you know

you're more lovely to me

than the fresh fallen snow.

Lovely.....

K.Snyder · Post by **K.Snyder** » Wed Sep 13, 2006 7:02 pm

Very enchanting

lanaia74 · Post by **lanaia74** » Sat Nov 25, 2006 3:33 am

VERY well done!

Uncle Kram · Post by **Uncle Kram** » Sat Nov 25, 2006 3:45 am

Another good one Pinks. I use to write poems like this and when I was in a band, I wrote all the lyrics. It wasn't until a few years later that I learned to play the guitar and started adding a few chords and turning them into songs. Most songs only have a few chords so it's easier than you'd think. I can see this poem as a song. Get strumming. :-6

Uncle Kram · Post by **Uncle Kram** » Sat Nov 25, 2006 4:30 am

Pinky;468519 wrote: I'm rubbish at playing instruments (except air oboe):yh_giggle
Yeah I've heard you're quite a virtuoso :wah:

Uncle Kram · Post by **Uncle Kram** » Sat Nov 25, 2006 4:39 am

Pinky;468522 wrote: 99% of rumours have some truth to them:yh_whistl
Not if I've started them :sneaky:

guppy · Post by **guppy** » Sat Nov 25, 2006 8:09 pm

a beautiful poem. :-4

CARLA · Post by **CARLA** » Sat Nov 25, 2006 8:14 pm

Very nice Pinky you did it again.. :-4