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neffy
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You happy now?

is it any better for you now?

do you still laugh and joke?

it is sunny and green there,or is it dark and moody?

do you miss us,or are you so happy that time means nothing?



I miss you,i think of you :

I look up to the clouds,your new home and wondering what you are doing.

my pain has not yet gone,has yours?

You where the brave one,i was the coward.



I now know that you are all around me,which is something i am happy about,

I hear you ,i see you and i can smell you:

Thats all i got now,but dad i am happy with that.



This is the forst time that i wrote this,it is for my dad ,it is not a master piece but it means alot to me.

Thank you for reading
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It's beautiful, Neffy, and straight from your heart
Live the questions now. Perhaps you will then gradually, without noticing it, live along some distant day into the answers...Rainer Maria Rilke
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Post by SuzyB »

Thats lovely Neffy :-4
I am nobody..nobody is perfect...therefore I must be Perfect!





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