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Did you ever make up a silly poem when you were a kid?

If so, i'll tell you mine, if you tell me yours :)
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This is a little something I like to recite as the family comes together at Thanksgiving.

They just love it !



The hatred you instilled in me,

Which will never leave.

You've turned my heart black,

It's never gonna go back.

It's all your fault,

And me it will always haunt.

Revenge is now what I seek,

Just hope again never shall we meet.

If you do cross my path,

You'll face my unworldly wrath.

My love for you is no more,

Of my hatred you are the very core.

Your blood will be mine,

So start changing your mind.

Of the life you plan to take from me,

Which my tortured soul will live for eternity.

The haunting of your mortal life,

My soul will forever like.

This is what you've done,

There's no reason for me to run.

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Pinky;701960 wrote: I did! It's in a book round at my mum's place...I'm still making up silly poems now, hehehe!:D


You'll have to tell me what it is :wah:

bet yours makes sense though, mine doesn't at all, i made it up when i was about 7 or 8 :wah:
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Nomad;701977 wrote: This is a little something I like to recite as the family comes together at Thanksgiving.

They just love it !



The hatred you instilled in me,

Which will never leave.

You've turned my heart black,

It's never gonna go back.

It's all your fault,

And me it will always haunt.

Revenge is now what I seek,

Just hope again never shall we meet.

If you do cross my path,

You'll face my unworldly wrath.

My love for you is no more,

Of my hatred you are the very core.

Your blood will be mine,

So start changing your mind.

Of the life you plan to take from me,

Which my tortured soul will live for eternity.

The haunting of your mortal life,

My soul will forever like.

This is what you've done,

There's no reason for me to run.






Oh yeah, i can really see why they would love that:wah:
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Theyre a kooky bunch.

After grandma gets drunk we like to tie her shoes together. :-6
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Nomad;702006 wrote: Theyre a kooky bunch.

After grandma gets drunk we like to tie her shoes together. :-6


:yh_rotfl that would be a sight to see
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I wrote this when I was fifteen, during the Viet Nam war.

Hush, little baby.

Sleep in the rain.

Soon will come rainbows

And love again.

Men, now, are angry;

They cause the storm.

But, you must sleep on.

I'll keep you warm.

Forget the black night.

Breathe air of love.

Sleep, little baby.

Dream of the dove.

I have a gray notebook that I have kept all these years with my dabblings.

It' your turn.

PS. Nomad............................are you related to Stephen King?:-3
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along-for-the-ride;702046 wrote: I wrote this when I was fifteen, during the Viet Nam war.

Hush, little baby.

Sleep in the rain.

Soon will come rainbows

And love again.

Men, now, are angry;

They cause the storm.

But, you must sleep on.

I'll keep you warm.

Forget the black night.

Breathe air of love.

Sleep, little baby.

Dream of the dove.

I have a gray notebook that I have kept all these years with my dabblings.

It' your turn.

PS. Nomad............................are you related to Stephen King?:-3


I don't know if i can now.....ok, i'll do it when kids are in bed, cos i can hardly stay on here long enough to type this.
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AngelEyes82;702049 wrote: I used to all the time.. the thing is they are in a box in my moms basement all the way in Illinois. I can't remember any of them. :p


ok then :yh_liar :wah:
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Ok, it's short stupid and doesn't make sense.... but here goes (bare in mind, i was only about 7 or 8 at the time)

Dippy Dippy Dumpy,

Went to a bumpy,

To buy a great big bum.

He put the bum on,

And said very nice,

Now i'll have a packet of rice.

Dippy Dippt Dumpy, went home,

He couldn't fit his bum through the door

So he pulled and pulled and pulled till he could

and he fell right through the floor



I really can't believe i told you this :yh_blush
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do ya need a doctor
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el guapo;702181 wrote: do ya need a doctor


:wah: i told you it was stupid and i was only young when i made it up
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